One Page Challenge

Red Right Hand has called on screenwriters to post one page of their unproduced works on their blog and then link it here. So it seemed like a fitting reason to return to Parts Flying, which I've been sorely neglecting while I save the whales.

The missive states: no set-up or explanations, no apologies. And whether you're a screenwriter or not, it's worth visiting and reading what others have posted - interesting glimpses into the sea of unrecognized talent lurking out here in La-la.

So here it is: (you're gonna have to click on it a couple times to enlarge it to legibility)